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Deviousness `ChewedKandi has certainly gone out of her way to keep the vector community on the right path. Always making sure that her talents are infinitely scalable, Sharon has put her bezier curves to excellent use, and firmly anchored herself as an inspirational leader. We're absolutely delighted to bestow the Deviousness Award for June 2013 to `ChewedKandi. Congratulations, Sharon! Read More
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Sta.sh
A few points I would like go over...
1. It isn't too clear what is going on in the picture
I'm not sure what's going on really. I mean....Midna and Link are doing...what? The background is pretty, but maybe if you had a better composition this piece would really pop.
2. Proportions
The eyes are slightly too wide for it to be a side view. If you look at many different artist styles they are usually a little more narrow because on a real human, a side view of a head shows only a small amount of the eye, since our eyes are placed in the front of our faces.
3. Slight over blending
This is a problem that many many artists (including myself) have run into. You've over-blended slightly with parts of Link's hat and Midna's hair.
Other than that, great work! I really hope you don't take this as to be mean and I hope I didn't sound harsh or cruel. Trust me, I've had all of these problems as well and I am still working hard to improve! With more practice you'll have easy sailing for digital art!
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